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[SoulPain (FanEAW)]

Grievous looks at Skirata, "look, this organisation is well known since their "coup" on the mandalorian diplomatic vessel, we believe that this organisation has been plotting for some sort of "change" to the galaxy. this organisation has become a prime taget for both the UNSC and the Mandalorian. they have proved their ressource availability and its enough. next target we believe will be on Mandalore. we need a team to investigate and eliminate criminal cells. we need combat hardened veterans. a small group like you is more than enough for special Operations. should you choose to accept, you will be granted better gear if you need some or want some. and a generous pay with that." says grievous. he finishes his drink, and leaves a card on the table, "this is how you can contact me, i will be available at all times. if you are interested into doing some jobs for us. we pay well also."

[Kratas]

"Hmm...I think we could come to some agreement. I'll send you a list of armaments we'll be requiring tomorrow but for now I want two speeder bikes,three combat speeders and a safe house Kyrimorut. We will also be needing a transport,something fast,dependable and that packs a punch,we will need that to get us to our base On Concordia, I know an old mine that should be fit for our base. Do this and we'll start on the trail within the hour, oh and we'll take that terrorist with us. I'm sure we'll get what we need out of him."

[SoulPain (FanEAW)]

Grievous gets up, and looks at the comandos, "well thats the thing, the UNSC has different... technology, nonetheless its still as good as speeders, and almost as fast if modified." grievous reaches for a chip in his cape. "here, you have two choices, either we can give you warthogs, modified. and maybe am aircraft if i can squeeze you one. or you can take this chip, itll be more than enough to buy the speeders you want." he says. grievous also gives him a electronic keycard. "we have safehouses for mercenaries and bounty hunter or other hired personnel or even for other needs scattered on many planets, not just ours. this safehouse is on venus, where i am. as for the transport you will have to come with me, on coruscant. so that you can choose your needs."

Meanwhile, on coruscant: President Antonucci walks in the bridge of the UNSC Salvatore, his new capital ship was finally completed, along with her twin sister, UNSC Hope. both prototypes wer standing out from the shipyard, proud, new and ready for combat. Leviathan class destroyers were they called.

Prosser: sir, who will be captain of UNSC Hope?

the president smiles "i have an idea who."

[Kratas]

"That's fair enough,I'll take the chip."
Skirata turned to the clones and others,who had reappeared from amongst the crowd.
"Walon,you are to take Prudii,Kom'rk and Mereel as well as Omega squad,Corr and Etain to establish our base on Concordia. Jaing,Ordo and Mereel you will stay here. Lie low and keeps your eyes open for any of these terrorists. Delta and Bardan,your coming with me to Coruscant."

[SoulPain (FanEAW)]

"That's fair enough,I'll take the chip."
Skirata turned to the clones and others,who had reappeared from amongst the crowd.
"Walon,you are to take Prudii,Kom'rk and Mereel as well as Omega squad,Corr and Etain to establish our base on Concordia. Jaing,Ordo and Mereel you will stay here. Lie low and keeps your eyes open for any of these terrorists. Delta and Bardan,your coming with me to Coruscant."

grievous smiles, "you can take the terrorist also, do what you want with him, i dont care we just want information."

grievous, skirata, Delta and Bardan (thought it was Burdan?) all get on a D82-EST Darter dropship (those ones used in halo wars to drop supplies from spirit of fire to ground troops), only to board onto a larger vessel, a Midsummer Night-type light frigate (similar role to a prowler) coming out of the dark cargo hold of the dropship, they get out, in a fairly small hangar, just enough to hous a couple of platoons and some vehicles/heavy equipment.

On the bridge, as they exit warp, a beautiful sight ofthe ever bustling city of coruscant, with its particular circular shapes of fire or lava. orbited by old, but modified republic space stations and drydocks, they now serve as the Navy's main repair and maintenance facility. along of all those, two, biggger ships could be seen, as they stand out, in a menacing shape and size.

[Kratas]

"That's fair enough,I'll take the chip."
Skirata turned to the clones and others,who had reappeared from amongst the crowd.
"Walon,you are to take Prudii,Kom'rk and Mereel as well as Omega squad,Corr and Etain to establish our base on Concordia. Jaing,Ordo and Mereel you will stay here. Lie low and keeps your eyes open for any of these terrorists. Delta and Bardan,your coming with me to Coruscant."

grievous smiles, "you can take the terrorist also, do what you want with him, i dont care we just want information."

grievous, skirata, Delta and Bardan (thought it was Burdan?) all get on a D82-EST Darter dropship (those ones used in halo wars to drop supplies from spirit of fire to ground troops), only to board onto a larger vessel, a Midsummer Night-type light frigate (similar role to a prowler) coming out of the dark cargo hold of the dropship, they get out, in a fairly small hangar, just enough to hous a couple of platoons and some vehicles/heavy equipment.

On the bridge, as they exit warp, a beautiful sight ofthe ever bustling city of coruscant, with its particular circular shapes of fire or lava. orbited by old, but modified republic space stations and drydocks, they now serve as the Navy's main repair and maintenance facility. along of all those, two, biggger ships could be seen, as they stand out, in a menacing shape and size.

(I accidentally mentioned Mereel twice,it is A'den is accompanying Vau not Mereel,Mereel is on Mandalore.

"These ships certainly seem primitive,but hell,theyre fast,now tell me. What are those?"
Skirata says indicating towards the two large ships.


--Meanwhile on Concordia--

"Corr,Fi get that power generator working,Darman have you got those defensive shields and when the hell will we have those turrets online. Etain,go get Niner and tell him to report in scanner results every 10 minutes,oh and have him dispatch scouting drones ASAP. "
Walon Vau and the others are busy setting up the defences and cloaking technology of the base.



Meanwhile on Mandalore Ordo was sat at the base of a great monument,scanning all the passerbys for unusual amounts of weaponry or strange outgoing signals,Mereel meanwhile watches over the spaceport through a sniper rifle from afar,keeping check of all incoming and outgoing individuals whilst Jaing began working his way throughout the beggars of the city,recruiting informants and arranging rendezvous'

[SoulPain (FanEAW)]

"That's fair enough,I'll take the chip."
Skirata turned to the clones and others,who had reappeared from amongst the crowd.
"Walon,you are to take Prudii,Kom'rk and Mereel as well as Omega squad,Corr and Etain to establish our base on Concordia. Jaing,Ordo and Mereel you will stay here. Lie low and keeps your eyes open for any of these terrorists. Delta and Bardan,your coming with me to Coruscant."

grievous smiles, "you can take the terrorist also, do what you want with him, i dont care we just want information."

grievous, skirata, Delta and Bardan (thought it was Burdan?) all get on a D82-EST Darter dropship (those ones used in halo wars to drop supplies from spirit of fire to ground troops), only to board onto a larger vessel, a Midsummer Night-type light frigate (similar role to a prowler) coming out of the dark cargo hold of the dropship, they get out, in a fairly small hangar, just enough to hous a couple of platoons and some vehicles/heavy equipment.

On the bridge, as they exit warp, a beautiful sight ofthe ever bustling city of coruscant, with its particular circular shapes of fire or lava. orbited by old, but modified republic space stations and drydocks, they now serve as the Navy's main repair and maintenance facility. along of all those, two, biggger ships could be seen, as they stand out, in a menacing shape and size.

(I accidentally mentioned Mereel twice,it is A'den is accompanying Vau not Mereel,Mereel is on Mandalore.

"These ships certainly seem primitive,but hell,theyre fast,now tell me. What are those?"
Skirata says indicating towards the two large ships.


--Meanwhile on Concordia--

"Corr,Fi get that power generator working,Darman have you got those defensive shields and when the hell will we have those turrets online. Etain,go get Niner and tell him to report in scanner results every 10 minutes,oh and have him dispatch scouting drones ASAP. "
Walon Vau and the others are busy setting up the defences and cloaking technology of the base.



Meanwhile on Mandalore Ordo was sat at the base of a great monument,scanning all the passerbys for unusual amounts of weaponry or strange outgoing signals,Mereel meanwhile watches over the spaceport through a sniper rifle from afar,keeping check of all incoming and outgoing individuals whilst Jaing began working his way throughout the beggars of the city,recruiting informants and arranging rendezvous'

(lol i see didnt see that till ou said it, good to you for clearing it up)

"these are two prototype ships, Leviathan class destroyers. they may not look like much but--"
grievous is interupted by an priority incoming transmission

"Grievous! you are needed on UNSC Hope, ASAP. the president wants to see you." says Prosser through transmission
"Yes ill head there right away general." acknoledges grievous, as he walks up fron of the bridge, "dock on docking station 18 of Maintenance Section 1" while pointing directly at one of the stations, who docked the two prototype ships.

"anyhow, as i was saying, they may not look like much but they can easily take on one Venator-class Star destroyer. bigger arsenal in every way, just no fighter or bomber complements but we have other ships that easily covers this role. plus it can carry roughly almost 2x the size and amount of ground crew/equipment/vehicles than a venator." says grievous, with pride.

arriving at the space station, while traveling through the hallways, it could easily be seen that this was a very busy space station, full of guards and military personel. and modified equipement inside to fit UNSC standards, and needs. People were running and walking around in every direction.

"all personel report to your stations. standby for UNSC Hope and UNSC Salvatore launching procedure: T-minus 10 minutes. station Heat and radiation shields at full power." said a female voice, echoing through the large hallways.

[Kratas]

(Not sure how to reply to this...)


The group walked on,Etain stopped.

"Something is wrong here,something feels terribly wrong!"

All of a sudden Etain collapsed to the ground,Sev broke her fall just in the nick of time.

An hour later in the medbay,Etain lay muttering whilst Skirata and the others stood about the bed. Fixer and Boss were,ominously not present.

[SoulPain (FanEAW)]

(Not sure how to reply to this...)


The group walked on,Etain stopped.

"Something is wrong here,something feels terribly wrong!"

All of a sudden Etain collapsed to the ground,Sev broke her fall just in the nick of time.

An hour later in the medbay,Etain lay muttering whilst Skirata and the others stood about the bed. Fixer and Boss were,ominously not present.

(aha... dont worry its my fault xD)

arriving in the ship's main hangar portion, where it seemed that a whole army could park their vehicles and aircraft here. the hangar was just huge, bearing a massive 550 meter long by 400 meters wide with about 5 stories tall. "pretty tall hangar i know, but not really a waste of space we have separators that open and closes, and right now theyre opened, they are situated every 2 floors, the top floor is served for placing foot infantry at readiness level if we need to send down some troops, fast and accurate." explains grievous.

"grievous" says the president. "welcome to you new flagship. you will no longer serve as venus's personal advisor. you will be my personal advisor."

delta and bardan had remarked that the predient was weraing an old Jedi grand master uniform.

[Kratas]

Oops I got my jedi locations mixed up,lets ignore the collapsing thing.

Bardan stepped forward.

"Excuse me...Mr president...but your clothing reminds me of an old order I was once a part of and yet I don't recognise your face?"



Vau reports to Skirata that the Concordia base is complete with optical camouflage,shielding,turrets,scanners and a few scattered minefields,another key defensive point is only one road leading through a canyon to get to it whilst the overhanging bits of rock prevent any thing bigger than a speeder from getting through.


One of Jaings informants reports a shifty character snooping around the gutter areas of the city,Him and Ordo head out to investigate.

[SoulPain (FanEAW)]

Oops I got my jedi locations mixed up,lets ignore the collapsing thing.

Bardan stepped forward.

"Excuse me...Mr president...but your clothing reminds me of an old order I was once a part of and yet I don't recognise your face?"



Vau reports to Skirata that the Concordia base is complete with optical camouflage,shielding,turrets,scanners and a few scattered minefields,another key defensive point is only one road leading through a canyon to get to it whilst the overhanging bits of rock prevent any thing bigger than a speeder from getting through.


One of Jaings informants reports a shifty character snooping around the gutter areas of the city,Him and Ordo head out to investigate.

(lol np )

the president looks at both jedis, (he had his hood up).

"what are they doing here" asks the president

"they are part of a group we hired to trace and eliminate the terrorist cells" says grievous. "in exchange fpr their service, we provide them with whatever support they need"

"I see, what are your names? young ones"

Meanwhile on Mandalore, an explosion occurs, blowing the right wing part of the spaceport. chaos quickly takes over.

[Kratas]

Oops I got my jedi locations mixed up,lets ignore the collapsing thing.

Bardan stepped forward.

"Excuse me...Mr president...but your clothing reminds me of an old order I was once a part of and yet I don't recognise your face?"



Vau reports to Skirata that the Concordia base is complete with optical camouflage,shielding,turrets,scanners and a few scattered minefields,another key defensive point is only one road leading through a canyon to get to it whilst the overhanging bits of rock prevent any thing bigger than a speeder from getting through.


One of Jaings informants reports a shifty character snooping around the gutter areas of the city,Him and Ordo head out to investigate.

(lol np )

the president looks at both jedis, (he had his hood up).

"what are they doing here" asks the president

"they are part of a group we hired to trace and eliminate the terrorist cells" says grievous. "in exchange fpr their service, we provide them with whatever support they need"

"I see, what are your names? young ones"

Meanwhile on Mandalore, an explosion occurs, blowing the right wing part of the spaceport. chaos quickly takes over.

(There is only Bardan here,Etain is on Concordia)

"I am Bardan Jusik,I left the order shortly before the end of the clone wars."

Skirata,sensing the tension slowly lowers his hands to a pair of vibroblades,the action goes unnoticed by all in the room.






"Jaing,Ordo! Get back to the spaceport,Jaing I want you to cover the undercity path.
Ordo,I have a suspicious man in my sights he is wearing a dirty crimson jumpsuit with an arms vest. He looks to have two blasters and possibly a few grenades! I'll keep an eyes on,Mereel out."

Something nudges into the back of Mereels helmet, a blaster. "Get up!" The voice barked.



Ordo ran out into the street,straight into a group of terrified tourists. The commotion attracts the attention of the suspect who makes a hand signal before running off into the nearest alley. Two large men armed with Vibroblades appeared out of nowhere and intercepted Ordo. Ordo deflected the first strike on his crushgaunt,ducked and grabbed the mans neck,crushing it in an instant the man falls lifeless to the ground. Just as a second strike is coming in from Ordo's rear he whirls round and pops a round into the mans head. Before running into the alleyway,he runs past a body with blaster marks in the alley and straight towards the end of the Alley. The suspect can be seen jumping into the undercity.
"JAING! The target is headed your way."


As Jaing rounds the next corner a figure jumps down from the platform above,landing on all fours. A civilian approached him to help him up,moments later woman had a small blade lodged in her eye.
The man whirled in Jaings direction only to meet the hard Beskar of Jaings gauntlet hitting his nose,the man went down crumpled in a heap.
Moments later Ordo turns up with a squad of Mandalorian security.
"The shuttles nearby,let's get this chakaar to Vau. Mereel,we're heading back to Concordia....Mereel....Mereel report in!"

The two commandos shared a look and Jaing jetted up to the platform above and towards Mereels position.

[SoulPain (FanEAW)]

(sorry i have mistakenly thought both jedis were me. where the hell is Roguebantha???)

"grievous" said the president, he puts his left arm on grievous's right shoulder, "go admire you ship now. i wish to talk to this young jedi."

"as you wish Mr. President" and he takes off.

"walk with me, jedi. you know who i am?" he asks

the jedi nods a no

"I was once in the order as well, one of yoda's personal apprentices, also an experiment." he says, "have you heard about what happened shortly after the clone wars ended? by that i mean, the imfamous Order 66."

[Kratas]

(sorry i have mistakenly thought both jedis were me. where the hell is Roguebantha???)

"grievous" said the president, he puts his left arm on grievous's right shoulder, "go admire you ship now. i wish to talk to this young jedi."

"as you wish Mr. President" and he takes off.

"walk with me, jedi. you know who i am?" he asks

the jedi nods a no

"I was once in the order as well, one of yoda's personal apprentices, also an experiment." he says, "have you heard about what happened shortly after the clone wars ended? by that i mean, the imfamous Order 66."

"There are few that do,but no Jedi could escape that massacre unscathed in some way,if it wasnt for Kal then I would have been one of the many."

[Roguebantha]

Sorry I haven't responded...

The Mandalore walked quickly down the hall of the main command center as many people started shoving reports, papers, etc. at him. He took the one that showed a video of the right side of the spaceport being destroyed. He stood there for a moment then barked,

"Lock down the spaceport and get Mandalorian troops out there! I don't want anyone else getting on or off the planet besides me! Lock down the streets! Order must be restored!!!"

Colus walked down the street filled with rage and lightsaber in hand. Just then, he encountered a downed Mereel, with a bloody gash in his head. Mereel recognized the man from the encounter in the cantina. (Sorry Kratas if this might sound a little controlling. Looks like the action was headed to this point anyway) Just then a man jetted up onto the platform, one that Colus recognized but was unable to remember his name. Colus activated his sensory gadgets, and found a thin trace of death going deep into the shadows. He looked at Jaing:

"I'm going after whoever did this. You can come with me if you want or you can call in a ship and go with Mereel."

Colus took off.


At the spaceport, everything was utter confusion. Mandalorian officers and security were slowing restoring order but were not letting anyone in or out. They had so far encountered three suspicious men who were being held in custody.


Just then, a large fleet of Mandalorian ships, mostly Venators but also some larger Victory's, appeared out of hyperspace in a burst of light. Immediately, all the ships moved in crisp formation to blockade the planet of Mandalore. All Mandalorian planets had something similar happen. Until the crisis had abated, no one and nothing got in or out.

[SoulPain (FanEAW)]

(sorry i have mistakenly thought both jedis were me. where the hell is Roguebantha???)

"grievous" said the president, he puts his left arm on grievous's right shoulder, "go admire you ship now. i wish to talk to this young jedi."

"as you wish Mr. President" and he takes off.

"walk with me, jedi. you know who i am?" he asks

the jedi nods a no

"I was once in the order as well, one of yoda's personal apprentices, also an experiment." he says, "have you heard about what happened shortly after the clone wars ended? by that i mean, the imfamous Order 66."

"There are few that do,but no Jedi could escape that massacre unscathed in some way,if it wasnt for Kal then I would have been one of the many."

the president pulled his hood down, with burn and lightsaber scars to his face. and a sad look also.

"i had many friends, on coruscant, most of them jedi, and some of them parents of young padawans, younglings." he starts "when order 66 came through, the 501st legion walking in force, killing every last of the jedis, civiians, wommen, children..." (starting to tremble in his voice, Bardan could sense a great deal of fear, pain, sorrow and anger, but that quickly disapears after some silence) his back was facing the jedi now, as if he didnt want him to see his face " I said i was an experiment earlier, that is why you sensed anger but that all quickly dissipated. I am half Jedi half sith, i know this seems impossible, but it turned out to be perfect for me. i have both the enlightment and the justice and good judgment/good will of the jedi, as well as having the ability to use my anger in battle, my hate, and so on." he turns sideways to Bardan and continues walking "when i saw the clones walk in, i sensed danger, i protected as many as i could, but failed ultimately, they all died, i wish i could have met that litle anakin skywalker, he wouldnt have lived... I killed as many cloe troopers as i could. dozens, hundreds. but in the end, i had to escape. I exiled myself from the galaxy for some time, and then moved on, this is where i discovered the UNSC, and why i am head of it. Justice is my main goal."

Sorry I haven't responded...

The Mandalore walked quickly down the hall of the main command center as many people started shoving reports, papers, etc. at him. He took the one that showed a video of the right side of the spaceport being destroyed. He stood there for a moment then barked,

"Lock down the spaceport and get Mandalorian troops out there! I don't want anyone else getting on or off the planet besides me! Lock down the streets! Order must be restored!!!"

Colus walked down the street filled with rage and lightsaber in hand. Just then, he encountered a downed Mereel, with a bloody gash in his head. Mereel recognized the man from the encounter in the cantina. (Sorry Kratas if this might sound a little controlling. Looks like the action was headed to this point anyway) Just then a man jetted up onto the platform, one that Colus recognized but was unable to remember his name. Colus activated his sensory gadgets, and found a thin trace of death going deep into the shadows. He looked at Jaing:

"I'm going after whoever did this. You can come with me if you want or you can call in a ship and go with Mereel."

Colus took off.


At the spaceport, everything was utter confusion. Mandalorian officers and security were slowing restoring order but were not letting anyone in or out. They had so far encountered three suspicious men who were being held in custody.


Just then, a large fleet of Mandalorian ships, mostly Venators but also some larger Victory's, appeared out of hyperspace in a burst of light. Immediately, all the ships moved in crisp formation to blockade the planet of Mandalore. All Mandalorian planets had something similar happen. Until the crisis had abated, no one and nothing got in or out.

meanwhile on earth's UNSC's general headquarters central command:

"General prosser!" yelled a young officer
"yes lieutenant?" asked the general, as he was busy signing papers.
"general! we've received reports about an explosion on mandalore! at a spaceport" says the officer
the general stood up quickly,  his face changing from neutral to "dear god" face (didnt know how to say it otherwise XD )
"bring the attention to central command, lieutenant, i am going to direct operation there from now on." says the general.

[Kratas]

Sorry I haven't responded...

The Mandalore walked quickly down the hall of the main command center as many people started shoving reports, papers, etc. at him. He took the one that showed a video of the right side of the spaceport being destroyed. He stood there for a moment then barked,

"Lock down the spaceport and get Mandalorian troops out there! I don't want anyone else getting on or off the planet besides me! Lock down the streets! Order must be restored!!!"

Colus walked down the street filled with rage and lightsaber in hand. Just then, he encountered a downed Mereel, with a bloody gash in his head. Mereel recognized the man from the encounter in the cantina. (Sorry Kratas if this might sound a little controlling. Looks like the action was headed to this point anyway) Just then a man jetted up onto the platform, one that Colus recognized but was unable to remember his name. Colus activated his sensory gadgets, and found a thin trace of death going deep into the shadows. He looked at Jaing:

"I'm going after whoever did this. You can come with me if you want or you can call in a ship and go with Mereel."

Colus took off.


At the spaceport, everything was utter confusion. Mandalorian officers and security were slowing restoring order but were not letting anyone in or out. They had so far encountered three suspicious men who were being held in custody.


Just then, a large fleet of Mandalorian ships, mostly Venators but also some larger Victory's, appeared out of hyperspace in a burst of light. Immediately, all the ships moved in crisp formation to blockade the planet of Mandalore. All Mandalorian planets had something similar happen. Until the crisis had abated, no one and nothing got in or out.

(Naa thats not really that controlling,that is simply nudging everything the right way )

Jaing jetted after Colus,determined to kill the Perpetrator.


The shuttle with the prisoner,Ordo and two of the Mandalorian soldiers dropped by to pick up Mereel before heading off into space,the shuttle got beyond the Mandalorian defences just before the hostile fleet came in. (Hope that's alright)

The pilot: Sir the scanners are picking up something inbound,several large objects. I can't clarify how many or what size."

Ordo stopped and thought for a moment.
"Stop everything,we're going dark."

He shouted back to the two soldiers "Make sure that prisoner is secure and Mereel is stable,and turn off anything giving out a signal."
He stepped back into the cockpit and peered over the pilots helmet into the dark abyss of space before an uncountable amount of starships sprung right before them. By some chance they found themselves between a pair of Acclamator's,though there was a venator not far beyond them. An obstacle that would be hard to get past undetected.
"The only thing I want online is life support. Keep the starboard thrusters on standby."



Mean while on Concordia.
Corr came running into the command center of their small base,almost going straight into Niner in his haste.
"A large fleet has just come out hyperspace,theyre surrounding Mandalore!"

A worried look on Vau's face emerged.
"Are they jamming us?"
Corr nodded.
"Any interdictors?
"Two but it will be another ten minutes before they're online."

"Okay heres the plan. Corr you and I will go down to that hypervelocity cannon you fixed up and man that.
Etain,I'm sending you with Omega squad on the ship. Your going to run the blockade and get to Coruscant,odds are with the jamming they won't know anything yet. If any ship tractor beams you then we'll take it out with the cannon,the AF lasers should keep fighters off your back. The rest of you get deep into the mines and arm all the defenses,odds are we'll soon have some visitors."



Damn I completely misread that,what a waste of a good few paragraphs.

(sorry i have mistakenly thought both jedis were me. where the hell is Roguebantha???)

"grievous" said the president, he puts his left arm on grievous's right shoulder, "go admire you ship now. i wish to talk to this young jedi."

"as you wish Mr. President" and he takes off.

"walk with me, jedi. you know who i am?" he asks

the jedi nods a no

"I was once in the order as well, one of yoda's personal apprentices, also an experiment." he says, "have you heard about what happened shortly after the clone wars ended? by that i mean, the imfamous Order 66."

"There are few that do,but no Jedi could escape that massacre unscathed in some way,if it wasnt for Kal then I would have been one of the many."

the president pulled his hood down, with burn and lightsaber scars to his face. and a sad look also.

"i had many friends, on coruscant, most of them jedi, and some of them parents of young padawans, younglings." he starts "when order 66 came through, the 501st legion walking in force, killing every last of the jedis, civiians, wommen, children..." (starting to tremble in his voice, Bardan could sense a great deal of fear, pain, sorrow and anger, but that quickly disapears after some silence) his back was facing the jedi now, as if he didnt want him to see his face " I said i was an experiment earlier, that is why you sensed anger but that all quickly dissipated. I am half Jedi half sith, i know this seems impossible, but it turned out to be perfect for me. i have both the enlightment and the justice and good judgment/good will of the jedi, as well as having the ability to use my anger in battle, my hate, and so on." he turns sideways to Bardan and continues walking "when i saw the clones walk in, i sensed danger, i protected as many as i could, but failed ultimately, they all died, i wish i could have met that litle anakin skywalker, he wouldnt have lived... I killed as many clone troopers as i could. dozens, hundreds. but in the end, i had to escape. I exiled myself from the galaxy for some time, and then moved on, this is where i discovered the UNSC, and why i am head of it. Justice is my main goal."

"You did well to survive,it has haunted me ever since that I wasnt there to defend the temple. Mind my intrusion but,if Justice is your main goal...what are the others?"

[Roguebantha]

I'm sorry, Kratas, should I ignore the crossed out stuff?

Colus single-mindedly pursued the trail through alleys, darkened passageways, cantinas, and past bodies. Lots of bodies. The instigators of this crime were obviously not yet ready to give up their identity. Colus was quite ready for them to however and his Force-augmented speed kept him always just in sight of Jaing. In a relatively short amount of time, Colus came out in a darkened hangar located in an abandoned warehouse, (It's always an abandoned warehouse isn't it?) still with the sign, "Cybot Galactica Industries," etched plainly in the door. Colus raced to the door of the spaceship and was immediately aboard without a second thought for his own safety. He found the terrorists waiting for him. Even as they opened up with blasterfire, Colus somersaulted high over it, pulling his lightsaber down hard on one of the terrorists skull. To Colus's surprise, the lightsaber did no identifiable damage to the man at all. The men did not look surprised though, and advanced on the downed Colus for the kill. Colus reached out with the Force and crushed one of the men's throat. The look of surprise on the man's face was definitely identifiable. The other terrorist stopped uncertainly which gave time for Colus to bring his lightsaber around and through the man's leg. The man howled and the red lightsaber glittered as blood splattered along its length. Colus rolled to his feet and brought the lightsaber to within an inch of the terrorist's neck even as the terrorist brought a hand out with a small remote control hidden in it...

[SoulPain (FanEAW)]

Sorry I haven't responded...

The Mandalore walked quickly down the hall of the main command center as many people started shoving reports, papers, etc. at him. He took the one that showed a video of the right side of the spaceport being destroyed. He stood there for a moment then barked,

"Lock down the spaceport and get Mandalorian troops out there! I don't want anyone else getting on or off the planet besides me! Lock down the streets! Order must be restored!!!"

Colus walked down the street filled with rage and lightsaber in hand. Just then, he encountered a downed Mereel, with a bloody gash in his head. Mereel recognized the man from the encounter in the cantina. (Sorry Kratas if this might sound a little controlling. Looks like the action was headed to this point anyway) Just then a man jetted up onto the platform, one that Colus recognized but was unable to remember his name. Colus activated his sensory gadgets, and found a thin trace of death going deep into the shadows. He looked at Jaing:

"I'm going after whoever did this. You can come with me if you want or you can call in a ship and go with Mereel."

Colus took off.


At the spaceport, everything was utter confusion. Mandalorian officers and security were slowing restoring order but were not letting anyone in or out. They had so far encountered three suspicious men who were being held in custody.


Just then, a large fleet of Mandalorian ships, mostly Venators but also some larger Victory's, appeared out of hyperspace in a burst of light. Immediately, all the ships moved in crisp formation to blockade the planet of Mandalore. All Mandalorian planets had something similar happen. Until the crisis had abated, no one and nothing got in or out.

(Naa thats not really that controlling,that is simply nudging everything the right way )

Jaing jetted after Colus,determined to kill the Perpetrator.


The shuttle with the prisoner,Ordo and two of the Mandalorian soldiers dropped by to pick up Mereel before heading off into space,the shuttle got beyond the Mandalorian defences just before the hostile fleet came in. (Hope that's alright)

The pilot: Sir the scanners are picking up something inbound,several large objects. I can't clarify how many or what size."

Ordo stopped and thought for a moment.
"Stop everything,we're going dark."

He shouted back to the two soldiers "Make sure that prisoner is secure and Mereel is stable,and turn off anything giving out a signal."
He stepped back into the cockpit and peered over the pilots helmet into the dark abyss of space before an uncountable amount of starships sprung right before them. By some chance they found themselves between a pair of Acclamator's,though there was a venator not far beyond them. An obstacle that would be hard to get past undetected.
"The only thing I want online is life support. Keep the starboard thrusters on standby."



Mean while on Concordia.
Corr came running into the command center of their small base,almost going straight into Niner in his haste.
"A large fleet has just come out hyperspace,theyre surrounding Mandalore!"

A worried look on Vau's face emerged.
"Are they jamming us?"
Corr nodded.
"Any interdictors?
"Two but it will be another ten minutes before they're online."

"Okay heres the plan. Corr you and I will go down to that hypervelocity cannon you fixed up and man that.
Etain,I'm sending you with Omega squad on the ship. Your going to run the blockade and get to Coruscant,odds are with the jamming they won't know anything yet. If any ship tractor beams you then we'll take it out with the cannon,the AF lasers should keep fighters off your back. The rest of you get deep into the mines and arm all the defenses,odds are we'll soon have some visitors."



Damn I completely misread that,what a waste of a good few paragraphs.

(sorry i have mistakenly thought both jedis were me. where the hell is Roguebantha???)

"grievous" said the president, he puts his left arm on grievous's right shoulder, "go admire you ship now. i wish to talk to this young jedi."

"as you wish Mr. President" and he takes off.

"walk with me, jedi. you know who i am?" he asks

the jedi nods a no

"I was once in the order as well, one of yoda's personal apprentices, also an experiment." he says, "have you heard about what happened shortly after the clone wars ended? by that i mean, the imfamous Order 66."

"There are few that do,but no Jedi could escape that massacre unscathed in some way,if it wasnt for Kal then I would have been one of the many."

the president pulled his hood down, with burn and lightsaber scars to his face. and a sad look also.

"i had many friends, on coruscant, most of them jedi, and some of them parents of young padawans, younglings." he starts "when order 66 came through, the 501st legion walking in force, killing every last of the jedis, civiians, wommen, children..." (starting to tremble in his voice, Bardan could sense a great deal of fear, pain, sorrow and anger, but that quickly disapears after some silence) his back was facing the jedi now, as if he didnt want him to see his face " I said i was an experiment earlier, that is why you sensed anger but that all quickly dissipated. I am half Jedi half sith, i know this seems impossible, but it turned out to be perfect for me. i have both the enlightment and the justice and good judgment/good will of the jedi, as well as having the ability to use my anger in battle, my hate, and so on." he turns sideways to Bardan and continues walking "when i saw the clones walk in, i sensed danger, i protected as many as i could, but failed ultimately, they all died, i wish i could have met that litle anakin skywalker, he wouldnt have lived... I killed as many clone troopers as i could. dozens, hundreds. but in the end, i had to escape. I exiled myself from the galaxy for some time, and then moved on, this is where i discovered the UNSC, and why i am head of it. Justice is my main goal."

"You did well to survive,it has haunted me ever since that I wasnt there to defend the temple. Mind my intrusion but,if Justice is your main goal...what are the others?"

"your right, justice is not only my main goal. you see, we have been tracking down several of the last remnants of the 501st me and some of my accolytes. and we believe that this "eagle" is one of them. i am searching for, revenge.when i am done, none of the 501st remnants will remain standing." he says is a cold blood.

grievous arrives in haste "we must hurry and get your  team ready asap, lets get down to coruscant now" in a haste, he turns towards the president before walking away "the terrorists have made their move on Mandalore, mr. president."

the president lifts his hood up, hiding his face, and hurries to his office.

I'm sorry, Kratas, should I ignore the crossed out stuff?

Colus single-mindedly pursued the trail through alleys, darkened passageways, cantinas, and past bodies. Lots of bodies. The instigators of this crime were obviously not yet ready to give up their identity. Colus was quite ready for them to however and his Force-augmented speed kept him always just in sight of Jaing. In a relatively short amount of time, Colus came out in a darkened hangar located in an abandoned warehouse, (It's always an abandoned warehouse isn't it?) still with the sign, "Cybot Galactica Industries," etched plainly in the door. Colus raced to the door of the spaceship and was immediately aboard without a second thought for his own safety. He found the terrorists waiting for him. Even as they opened up with blasterfire, Colus somersaulted high over it, pulling his lightsaber down hard on one of the terrorists skull. To Colus's surprise, the lightsaber did no identifiable damage to the man at all. The men did not look surprised though, and advanced on the downed Colus for the kill. Colus reached out with the Force and crushed one of the men's throat. The look of surprise on the man's face was definitely identifiable. The other terrorist stopped uncertainly which gave time for Colus to bring his lightsaber around and through the man's leg. The man howled and the red lightsaber glittered as blood splattered along its length. Colus rolled to his feet and brought the lightsaber to within an inch of the terrorist's neck even as the terrorist brought a hand out with a small remote control hidden in it...

-meanwhile on mandalore-
a second explosions is heard, much larger, at the spaceport, blowing much of the main terminal up. this time it didnt sound like a bomb explosion, but an impact explosion, coming from above.

[Kratas]

I'm sorry, Kratas, should I ignore the crossed out stuff?

Colus single-mindedly pursued the trail through alleys, darkened passageways, cantinas, and past bodies. Lots of bodies. The instigators of this crime were obviously not yet ready to give up their identity. Colus was quite ready for them to however and his Force-augmented speed kept him always just in sight of Jaing. In a relatively short amount of time, Colus came out in a darkened hangar located in an abandoned warehouse, (It's always an abandoned warehouse isn't it?) still with the sign, "Cybot Galactica Industries," etched plainly in the door. Colus raced to the door of the spaceship and was immediately aboard without a second thought for his own safety. He found the terrorists waiting for him. Even as they opened up with blasterfire, Colus somersaulted high over it, pulling his lightsaber down hard on one of the terrorists skull. To Colus's surprise, the lightsaber did no identifiable damage to the man at all. The men did not look surprised though, and advanced on the downed Colus for the kill. Colus reached out with the Force and crushed one of the men's throat. The look of surprise on the man's face was definitely identifiable. The other terrorist stopped uncertainly which gave time for Colus to bring his lightsaber around and through the man's leg. The man howled and the red lightsaber glittered as blood splattered along its length. Colus rolled to his feet and brought the lightsaber to within an inch of the terrorist's neck even as the terrorist brought a hand out with a small remote control hidden in it...

(I'll save it for a rainy day )

Jaing dropped down from the roof with a great crash,and landed just behind the final terrorist just as he'd raised a Vibroaxe to Colus' exposed rear,he grabbed the Terrorists throat from behind and within a moment had him held unconscious by the neck.

"your right, justice is not only my main goal. you see, we have been tracking down several of the last remnants of the 501st me and some of my accolytes. and we believe that this "eagle" is one of them. i am searching for, revenge.when i am done, none of the 501st remnants will remain standing." he says is a cold blood.

grievous arrives in haste "we must hurry and get your  team ready asap, lets get down to coruscant now" in a haste, he turns towards the president before walking away "the terrorists have made their move on Mandalore, mr. president."

the president lifts his hood up, hiding his face, and hurries to his office.

"I left the order behind me long ago,I share the sentiment. But before we go,what is your name?"






As the shuttle cleared the wrecked spaceport for Concordia the impact hit the main terminal. The Mandalorians and clones stared in disbelief at the crater that had hit the spaceport. Ordo jumped out of the shuttle heading back down with his jet pack in short bursts whilst  the Mandalorians took Mereel back to Concordia.
Walon sent the rest of the NULL ARCs to Mandalore with Etain in tow to back things up.