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General Morrell

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« on: September 19, 2007, 02:27 am »
I've attatched a story I've written to this post.  If anyone would want to read it, go ahead.

Oh, and give me some feed back on what you think.
« Last Edit: December 07, 2007, 02:10 am by Admiral Reynolds »
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Re: Stories
« Reply #1 on: September 19, 2007, 07:11 pm »
Very good. is there a Chapter 2? i want to know what happens when they get back to York and the consenquences of the unofficial rescue mission.
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« Reply #2 on: September 19, 2007, 11:33 pm »
I'm currently working on a contiunuation of that story.  The one posted here is only a small part of a larger story.
Posted on: September 19, 2007, 01:30:09 PM
As of today, I have thirteen chapters.  I'll probably finish it around teh time that Halo 3 comes out.  Some coincidence huh?
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« Reply #3 on: September 19, 2007, 11:39 pm »
lol, i started to read it...but very lazy so only read 2 pages :P
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« Reply #4 on: September 19, 2007, 11:41 pm »
You should try reading te\he whole thing.  By teh way, what did you think of the 2 pages you managed to read?
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« Reply #5 on: September 19, 2007, 11:42 pm »
it looks really good...real reason i couldnt read whole thing is my eyes are naffed and screen doesnt help so had 2 stop...
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« Reply #6 on: September 19, 2007, 11:43 pm »
Just finish it on your own time.  Tell me what you think when you finish.
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« Reply #7 on: September 19, 2007, 11:43 pm »
saved it...
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« Reply #8 on: September 19, 2007, 11:44 pm »
Good.  Now I won't have to bug you about reading it.
« Last Edit: September 20, 2007, 09:23 pm by Fleet Admiral »
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« Reply #9 on: September 19, 2007, 11:46 pm »
(yes...) lol
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« Reply #10 on: September 24, 2007, 05:16 pm »
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Very good. is there a Chapter 2? i want to know what happens when they get back to York and the consenquences of the unofficial rescue mission.

I'll give you the title of the story, but that's all I can give at teh moment.  My AI, Van, won't let me reveal any information until he thinks it's ready for people to read it. 

So just enjoy the short that I've posted here and be patient. 

The title of it is York's Demise and it's is full of stuff that I'm pretty sure that any sci-fi lover will enjoy.
Posted on: September 20, 2007, 03:32:53 PM
I've almost finished the story, but there is one snag.

I can't think of a name for the alien commander!  :wall :wall :wall

I could use a little help with it.  So if any of you have an idea for one, post it here.
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« Reply #11 on: September 24, 2007, 06:43 pm »
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« Reply #12 on: September 24, 2007, 11:40 pm »
Sounds alien to me.  I like it.  I'll put it in the story right away.
Posted on: September 24, 2007, 02:19:08 PM
I've finished the writing!  :great

Now I've got to read through it to make any corrections.  This'll take me a day or so to catch all of them.

I've finish just a few hours before Halo 3 came out.  Funny huh?

I'll be releasing it a chapter at a time, so stop by occasionally to see what happens.
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« Reply #13 on: September 24, 2007, 11:45 pm »
lol, when you get the book done what are you going to do? try and get it published? it looks good enough so far.

it could probably make it...ive seen books that sound like a 5 year old has written it in waterstones..lol
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« Reply #14 on: September 24, 2007, 11:57 pm »
Could my story be compared to another.  I want to know how good it is to some people.
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« Reply #15 on: September 25, 2007, 12:00 am »
id compare it to Halo-First Strike if you keep that quality up :D

btw, could have sworn i saw a post about characters... ??? did you edit it?
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Re: Stories
« Reply #16 on: September 25, 2007, 01:49 am »
Well i supose if i ever type it up i will post My story Rise of the reds Here {no i did not steal the name from the cnc mod I ahd the title fro years longer than there mod}  ::) Any way peace
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« Reply #17 on: September 25, 2007, 08:02 pm »
I've attatched a little backgroung info.  It gives the names of the human empires that I'll be writting about.
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« Reply #18 on: September 25, 2007, 08:04 pm »
nice...i take it you are going to cosentrate on the U.S. segment?
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« Reply #19 on: September 25, 2007, 08:06 pm »
I may be from the US, but I'm going to write stories about all five of them through the war.
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